Black Mesa Book?

Half-Life Series
#21

Yep. He learned at MIT, but he was a visiting fellow at the University of Innsbruck when he was offered a job at the BMRF.

Freeman Job Offer Letter

#22

After much time (And many Colas:what :slight_smile: I have decided to try again. Third time’s the charm:bms:

#23

coffeine doesnt make your writings better;in fact,worse.i learned that at a test on last monday.to be short,i failed :frowning:

#24

Max, you will be banned soon. Just so ya know.
Also, he just needed the caffene to think about his situation.

#25

It’s true max, I needed the caffine to help me think

#26

If you want to write fanfic, don’t write it about the main character. Gordon is meant to be you, giving him his own personality ruins the whole thing.

I’d suggest writing about a group of people trying to survive after the incident (á la Blue Shift).

#27

ur doin it wrong :3

It’s à :stuck_out_tongue:

#28

He also made another mistake. BS is an expansion, not a fanfic. His post should have read:

Okay, so I’m advertising my work. No different than my sig. :stuck_out_tongue:

#29

I read the first ‘excerpt’ of this so called story and laughed.

Your writing is elementary at best. Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and vocabulary.

#30

Well, it’s a learning experience for me. If you find this completely terrible, the story I wrote before it would probably burn your eyes. :stuck_out_tongue: It was crap.

#31

I thought it might be, but it was easier to write it incorrectly, so I did.
:fffuuu:

Hur durrr. No shit. I obviously meant that he should write about people surviving after the incident LIKE THE PEOPLE IN BLUE SHIFT. I don’t see how that makes it look like I thought it was fanfic.

#32

They write masterchief in them halo books :stuck_out_tongue:

#33

Did I say they were good?

#34

Have you read them? o.O

#35

Nope.

#36

Me either :smiley:

#37

Wow! HeadCrabeD get’s Everywere, Like an Oil Slick.

Also I think Raminator deserves a Cookie! Mmmm… Cookies!

#38

Its been done.

#39

Hey, I gotta say man thats very good writing for a fifteen year old! Nice job! I think you got a good thing goin on there.

#40

Your writing needs some improvement. Also, there is a literal novelization of Half Life and its expansion packs (Blue Shift and Opposing Force) on Fanfiction.net which is worth a look, if not much. It gives Freeman a personality and takes place before, during, and after the incident. It does alter the story and map layout a bit, so technically it’s not a novelization. It’s more like a remake of the game in story format.

Here’s the link:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/3147068/1/The_Black_Mesa_Incident

So, in essence, you should be better off doing a Half Life spin-off. Not to insult your writing, but the novelization’s already been done, and your writing isn’t much better.

EDIT: Sorry. Didn’t see That One Guy’s post… Give him the credit not me…

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