As an amateur low budget movie, that was certainly impressive.
As an HL2 based short movie? Not so much.
First off, why did they change the HL headcrab zombies into 28 Days Later/L4D style zombies? Couldn’t afford headcrab props? This is a slap in the face of HL fans.
Then they throw an holographic effect that, while was well done and looks really cool, it has no place in the HL2 universe, since the resistance has no access to technology like that. I mean, some of their weapons and vehicles are made from spare parts. How did they suddenly get a portable holographic computer? Doesn’t make sense. Just use a normal map. Whatever money they spent on this could have been used to make some headcrab props for the zombies.
Still, it wasn’t going too bad until they got to the fight scene between Adrian and the Metrocop. Now, it wouldn’t be too bad if they kept it believable as a simple hand to hand fight, but no, they had to have the Metrocop pull out a fucking Katana or something. And to add insult to injury, they give the characters some martial art acrobatics. What. The. Fuck.
Now, I understand these guys wanted some kickass short to include in their resume and making it based on a game loved by a lot of people was a sure fire way to attract a lot of attention. But why make all those changes and deviations from the source material? If you want your fanfic video to gain a lot of reputation amongst the community you’re targeting it for, you have to stay loyal to the source material as much as you can.
Escape from City 17 is a good example of that.
Now if this was an original short, with no ties to HL, this would’ve been much better.