Nope, completely fine with your edit! Interesting effect.
If I may make a suggestion for those that are going to do the “Where are we taking this Freeman guy?” lines, I suggest that, when it comes to the line, “Body? What body?” there should be a fairly significant pause between the two sentences.
The timing should be similar to this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1LldhNWeIlQ
Some of the posters smash the two sentences together and it doesn’t sound right to me.
I know these are still audition clips but for any final product, I think there should be similar timing in that line.
I’m just not sure what the team is looking for. I WANT TO PLEASE
I definitely have liked what people have done so far. Very impressed.
I, unfortunately, have a somewhat higher voice. I’m thinking I’ll try for what’s been done before, something halfway between a college bro and a soldier who’s a little terrified of what’s happening.
Dear lord. I just heard Eric’s voice-over. Wow. Incredible. How can I compete?
Any word on the deadline or cutoff date?
Patience, sir. We’ll work through it.
No doubt, just checkin’! Stay the course.
This is probably really late, but I just remembered something.
You should really consider changing the “We’ve got uglies” line back to “We’ve got hostiles”. The chapter WGH was named after it, it just doesn’t make a lot of sense to have it gone.
shit i forgot to re-email mine. better do that before it’s too late
You sound like the postal dude to me.
I hope all the people who submitted at the wrong address found out about the new one…
It’d be a real shame to miss out on some talent because of a fatal mistake like that.
Maybe you should try to spread awareness, first by contacting people in the thread who said they submitted theirs, then by posting news of the mistake in other places.
Well, after hearing some of these I feel kinda crappy about my recording method, but here it goes anyways.
Just checking… Has everyone here submitted their application sound files in email?
Yup, triple checked the one I originally sent, should be all good for me.
Since this is still open, I’d better get some lines done!
EDIT: Argh, my microphone is being super shitty when I’m yelling into it. Sound gets soooo distorted.
EDIT #2: I have a second mic- an old Xbox throat mic I got back when Modern Warfare 2 was in its heyday. It has the benefit of a tinny sound to it, making my voice already sound a bit like its been run through a high pass filter and is much quieter, so I can project more.
EDIT #3: Actually, loud dialog sounds EVEN SHITTIER. Argh. I think I’ll wait for tomorrow morning to let my vocal chords recharge, and then try it with the mic on my HV30 camera to see if I can cut down on the distortion.
resent mine just in case.
I managed to land studio time on my campus for April 28th, so I can get best quality stuff that day. I’ll probably try my HV30 today or tomorrow anyway to get a somewhat acceptable take to audition with.
These…these are being looked at, right?
I would imagine they’re being listened to, actually. 
But yeah, I would also like to know if the devs have found time to start decision-making for this. A lot of good submissions.
BLOODY HELL I FORGOT MY DAMN STUDIO TIME.
Trying to set up something else, I really want to get some voice to you that isn’t totally ass in terms of recording quality.