eyes
just pointing out
unless you plan to leave them having a blank stare
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Thats the way I was planning to leave them, it’s just the way those eyes are. But I might actually be going for a completely different style now, so we shall see.
The lines aren’t clean. The thickness fluctuates with no purpose.
They fluctuate because I want them to. That’s their purpose.
It doesn’t look very good.
It’s not good to exclude clean line-work, especially when you have second to no rendering.
Looks relatively clean to me.
Of course, I’m deeply sorry that, as one of my first real photoshop drawings, on an overly small/cheap tablet, that it couldn’t be perfect. I know perfect is the norm first time around :hmph:
This is why I am telling you this! Everyone makes quite a lot of mistakes their first time, and it’s good to tell them what they are doing wrong, so they can fix that later!
I’m not attacking you with what I said
Subjective. I disagree.
Sometimes it’s better to include no clean line-work; especially when one has no rendering at all. Something to do with personal style, overall style, desired effect. Just to clarify, that’s the artist’s style and desired effect. Again I have to disagree, I think it looks good the way it is, though Zoe’s crotch needs some work.
Well, apologies for once. You do kinda give off that vibe
EDIT: At padonkeh
Well I think it is awsm, and my potential next desktop when done.
Style still doesn’t stem from inadequacy. Please let the original poster speak for himself instead of jumping in going “NU UUHH IT’S HIS STYLE SEE”
Thx Wheybags :3 There are lots of cartoon renderings that emply the varying line thinknesses, how well it came out here is dubious.
Ed Edd n’ Eddy, for example.
(That show was so awesome)
Don’t ask.
That’s going to give me nightmares.
12 pages late but oh well it was a serious thing, looking at the penis in the gun made me spit out my cereal
son, you are writing checks your butt will find UNCASHABLE
decided to draw 2-d from the gorillaz.
and babes shooting eachother… o wait is that a mercenary from pandora tommorow? O>O
I agree with Pantonki, it would look better with clean lines.