Dragon Age Origin review check

[MaxTheLimit]

Recently released a review for Dragon Age Origins on my site.

I was wondering if folks on these forums get the time, if they could take a skim through and check my grammar, and make sure it comes off okay. Of course any thoughts and general comments are appreciated as well.

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Link?

[Psyborg]

I’ve lost the link to your site, hook me up dawg.

[Garcian_Smith]

https://www.maxthelimit.info/drage/drage.html

You chose between three possible character races. Human, dwarf and elf may not seem like a wide variety, but with the sub classes opportunities exist to make each character sub class play entirely differently.

Possibly change to ‘race’ to avoid repetition of ‘sub class’?

In tight quarters there is almost no possibility to move the camera around

I think this would read better as ‘There is little manoeuvrability with the camera when in tight spaces’. Or something to that effect.

That seems about it, to be honest. It’s a great review Max!

[MaxTheLimit]

The image is the link now.
Thanks GS.

[BT_Snow]

I loved the game, and this review is well made. The first thing I noticed, on the second page, though, was this:

I may not be the greatest PRG player, but I know what I’m doing enough to realize a major challenge when I’m up against it.

and on the third, this:

This is a hefty game and will put a bit of stress on higher end systems with all the bells a whistles active.

Aside from what Garcian Smith said above, that’s all I could find. Solid review.

[MaxTheLimit]

Made some changes.

@GS: Yes, that sentence was a bit clumsy. Went a little closer to your suggestion:

The camera has little manoeuvrability when in tight spaces, and the scroll out to the top view is often disabled entirely by walls.

@BT_S: Corrected those two.

Thanks again.