Spooks' Semi-Adventures: An Introduction

There, there. Now this topic here, it’s not going to be very useful. In terms of much redeeming value that is, for me I’m hoping it proves otherwise. Then again it doesn’t seem like a lot of threads on BM forums have any redeeming values to boot but oh well, that’s another topic. This thread is meant to be a test bed and a place where I would like to receive input from the community on certain questions.

I am hoping to start a MS Paint Adventure game on the forums within the next week (month? year? maybe never, don’t take my word for it), but before that, I would like to make sure if people would be invested enough to grant continuation on the project I’m working on. Simply put, if you are not interested I’d rather not waste my time on drawing and spend it doing something useful - playing video games for example.

In order to evaluate your level of investment in said prospect, I am going to sample a small meaningless story for you and ask you whether you are interested in participating in the medium. If you are, the proper MSPA gets a green light.

Now I’m sure most of you are acquainted with Problem Sleuth, Homestuck and other works of comicsmanship by author Andrew Hussie. And when I say MSPA many a reader would be quick to scream rip-off of Mr. Hussie’s work. I will have you know, though, that Mr. Hussie himself started his first adventure (Jail Break) as a forum game. The idea of a faux point-and-click/text adventure isn’t patented, neither are Mr. Hussie’s MS Paint adventures the only ones on the web. I excuse your ignorance, moving on now.

Said sample story I’m about to post here is only 13 images and was drawn over about an hour with commands given from friends on Skype and Steam (specifically Keresh, Patonki and Soup). In a real MSPA forum game the forumites provide their own input and the author makes do with either the first or best one of the supplied commands. The sample even reuses some “assets” I’ve drawn for the proper MSPA I’m preparing. By the way, a clarification that the latter would have a somewhat more refined look and consistent resolution as I was hardly trying with this. In any case, I’m not one to make pictures of circles and lines in Paint, post them on forums and expect people to get excited over the artistic turd I’ve presented them. I am also not 14 years old so the story will be both different and more original than what you’ll see in this sample, or any other MSPA forum game I’ve seen so far for that matter. Cause to be fair, most of those are basically huge nerd jack-offs to Andrew Hussie’s work filled with awful references to PS and HS. Whether that’s due to the authors’ absolute lack of creative ability or the fact that mspa.com is the only place they’ve experienced any sort of interactive fiction so far - that’s not my judgement to make. And when they are not, they are just bad and that’s that.

In addition of choosing whether BM forums deserve their own MSPA game, there’s some other decisions that you can influence. For example, would you like an Interactive Fiction, that is, a text adventure where the players give commands to the game? Or a Choose Your Own Adventure type of game, where the players have a set of predetermined options they get to choose from? Should the adventure have a set of controls (e.g. pull, give, open, etc.) the players should abide by or no? If you’ve any questions, ideas or concerns feel free to speak your mind.

Alright then, as much as I’m sure you love both walls of text and my verbosity I think I covered my idea fairly adequately. I will now proceed to posting the sample story.

As for the proper MSPA… I’ve always gone for a “when it’s done” approach. If I had to be specific… I’d say… 2010.

(I’ll see which alignments and font sizes look best and adjust accordingly. As I said this is a test bed.)

[FONT=‘Courier New’]

You are famed Black Mesa physicist Gordon Freeman. Shit has hit the fan and you are on the run. Aliens etc., this mess is pretty dire. What the heck do you do?[/SIZE]

>Go left[/SIZE]

This doesn’t help much! Shit is going down, you understand?? You feel a panic attack is immient.[/SIZE]

>FUCK SHIT DICK[/SIZE]

A cascade of repulsive images floods your mind. What kind of panic attack is this? You don’t understand. You just can’t understand.[/SIZE]

>Collect scientist tears, eat da poo poo[/SIZE]

You gather the valued ingredient in your POCKET BEAKER. It should come in handy later in your scientific research.

Your POCKET BEAKER is now almost 1/3rd full!

You also have some stinky poo but you aren’t sure what to do with it[/SIZE]

>Stir da poo poo?[/SIZE]

You stir a concoction most vile. For a scientist of your caliber, you really question your judgement over the helpfulness of this all.[/SIZE]

>Splash it on the wall[/SIZE]


Dismayed by your own incompetence in chemical compounding you sigh in a disappointing manner and proceed to dispose of the foul experiment and be on with your important tasks at once.[/SIZE]

>Be on with your important tasks?[/SIZE][/FONT]

[FONT=‘Courier New’]

You casually engage in important scientific tasks such as filling out clipboards and looking very busy and absent minded.

The black specter doesn’t seem to be buying it.[/SIZE]

>Apologize to black specter[/SIZE]

Aw c’mon now, this stuff can happen to anybody! You mean, we’ve all been stressed lately, what with the military invading the complex and all. And those alien things appearing from another dimension due to some windbag screwing up the whole mass spectrometer thing. What a dolt, haha, don’tcha think? Not that you know the guy or anythi–[/SIZE]


The black specter suddenly decides to take his leave. You guess… apology excepted? Well in any case, this definetely didn’t go as bad as you had anticipated![/SIZE]

>Go west?[/SIZE]

You move west-ward, towards the corner of the office you’re in.
Gosh golly jeepers, that can’t possibly be… a… crossbow?[/SIZE]


Ow.[/SIZE]

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AND SO ENDS YOUR QUEST.

Opinions.

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This could be kinda fun to have on this forum, but the writing could use some work. Also it’s good to have some idea of an overall story in mind when doing this, so it’s not just wandering around randomly.

I agree, More, Its quite entertaining

as long as the story you mention isn’t as linear as the demo you’ve gust given us (which it probably won’t) I’m totally in :3

Moar or gtfo :awesome:!!!

go north

you are pwned by a poison headcrab/fast zombie combo

seriously though it would certainly make the forum a more interesting place for a while, i vote yes

bscly

fuck ass penis

I’ve the overarching story checked, if you have any pointers on writing though I’d be glad if you shared them.

^^

Not sure. I just can’t say that I found the example to be funny, I guess. Potty humor just strikes me as boring most of the time.

Spelling might also need a little bit more attention, like the line “apology excepted” should probably be “apology accepted” & such.

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