ok guys they may not look that good but I really need your Opinion on the 2nd picture and a good improving suggestion will be appreciated
The Sun (Version 2)
me <—oh and btw those eyes are the real me, I didn’t do anything
The three words curiosity of you are bumping into each other and makes the sentence awkward to read. I would suggest either a subject/predicate line split of the sentence or ‘death of you’ to be its own line.
I’ll work on that, but what ya think about the other 2 ? 
The sun looks fairly good, although doesnt look very realistic because the black lines.
The black lines on the sun are unrealistic, the sun has black spots but they only show up as black because the temperature is a bit lower than the surrounding plasma.
edit:
You could fit a million Earths into the sun, the magnetic fields are going in all directions unlike the Earth so you’d never see large lines going across the surface.
Completely new planets not based on anything, FTW: