Silent takedown (Action Scene)

[cknr15]

I’ve made an action scene with friends. What do you think about it?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O62_hYOmlaY

[Eric_Fong]

Pretty good, the akimbo gun guy need to work on his reaction of bullet hit.

[b737lvr]

Over all it was pretty good but i couldn’t stop noticing un-realistic acting and placement of objects. A couple people reacted to bullet like they were hit with a BB gun.

The security cameras were VERY unrealistically placed. They were ALWAYS placed in these specific locations that were aimed EXACTLY at one spot. Like the one with the toilet.

Also, the shooters need to stop blind firing and start aiming. They were WAY too accurate to just be shooting weak wrist style.

Blood effects reminded me of putting kool-aid in those bottles that spray into a fan and make mist.

There were a lot of annoying camera view changes.

There may have been more i wanted to say but thats all i can remember.

[Spooboy]

@b737lvr

Over all it was pretty good but i couldn’t stop noticing un-realistic acting and placement of objects. A couple people reacted to bullet like they were hit with a BB gun.

The security cameras were VERY unrealistically placed. They were ALWAYS placed in these specific locations that were aimed EXACTLY at one spot. Like the one with the toilet.

Also, the shooters need to stop blind firing and start aiming. They were WAY too accurate to just be shooting weak wrist style.

Blood effects reminded me of putting kool-aid in those bottles that spray into a fan and make mist.

There were a lot of annoying camera view changes.

There may have been more i wanted to say but thats all i can remember.

I agree. It was a 7.5/10.

[ashton93]

I enjoyed it. Kinda cliche though. I give it an 8 of 10

[cknr15]

@b737lvr

Over all it was pretty good but i couldn’t stop noticing un-realistic acting and placement of objects. A couple people reacted to bullet like they were hit with a BB gun.

The security cameras were VERY unrealistically placed. They were ALWAYS placed in these specific locations that were aimed EXACTLY at one spot. Like the one with the toilet.

Also, the shooters need to stop blind firing and start aiming. They were WAY too accurate to just be shooting weak wrist style.

Blood effects reminded me of putting kool-aid in those bottles that spray into a fan and make mist.

There were a lot of annoying camera view changes.

There may have been more i wanted to say but thats all i can remember.

Can you give some examples with annoying camera view changes?

[Patonki]

the damn views changed for way too many times for simple actions. 3 views for a tire falling comes into mind
the composition of the scenes and editing weren’t that great
also the switching between letterbox and fullscreen what the hell!!! white flashing OVER the letterboxes was kinda dumb and pointless. nothing should happen over the letterboxes(except maybe subtitles) if you use them
i can say nothing of the acting, story or sound; i kinda skipped around the video and had music on.
it’s p.intermediate on the aspects i can comment on. keep producing more, and try to practice composition! it’s important where the eye focuses!

Edit:

this is my war face

[cknr15]

AAAAAH THATS A WAR FAAACE!!! Full Metal Jacket is so awesome ^^

[LimitBreak]

@Patonki

this is my war face

What are you holding again? Or is that not one of your actual pictures?

[Ibanez]

its from the OP’s movie, limitbreak

i thought it was hilarious. one thing i can say is for a ‘silent takedown’ there sure wasn’t much silence. also, shooting a guy who doesn’t see you and is taking a piss? cold, man. don’t shoot a dude with his dick out.