Black Mesa Source : Patience (Short Comic)

A short comic I made with Garry’s mod, this is just about people who can’t seem to wait in line.

Strip 1

Strip 2

Hope you guys like it. :slight_smile:

Note: I apologize for the 2nd strip suddenly BLOATING up in size, I have no idea why it did that. :meh:

Thanks for posting them, 'tis a good comic IMO :3

IMHO you could have just written this in a post, putting it in comic form doesn’t achieve anything except making the text hard to read.

Haha, read the first one like gman talks, the writing style really kinda fits it. Good job. :slight_smile:

pretty good, aside from a few grammar errors.

Ha, that made me lol.

that was good. that was really good. Why arent they together in one strip tho? And who is the hot chick?

Thank you all for the feedback, and yes I did notice my grammar & spelling mistakes. Making comics at 2: 30am can be a bit of a challenge. :stuck_out_tongue:

The idea was to concentrate on one character, this way the reader will mostly concentrate on the story more than the pictures themselves. Intros are best kept simple in terms of views.

As for the ‘hot chick’, that’s Samus Aran (Think I got the last name spelled wrong) from Metroid Prime.

And thank you! :3

I thought she was a guy when I played the origional.

Silly pixels.

I remember a time when comics were for entertainment, rather then rants with pictures.
B^U

It’s a bit hard to read, but I like it, good job.

Om nom nom comic.
Glad to see your comic model actually used for the first time.
Your model wont be the same for mah comic though.

Those are some pretty well done comics. My only criticism: It’s not called Black Mesa: Source anymore.

I thought it was samus, but her eye makeup is all messed up so I didn’t know for sure. :wink:

It seemed so long and serious and stuff, but the ending was… well… funny :smiley:

:lol:funny as! wasnt expecting the last line, haha

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