Like I said, I’ll update you guys. Here’s Failing Forward- https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cKrC7vCfSdA
recommendations, critiques, and helpful comments appreciated. Thanks 
I’m not sure if you create music to apply to an element (video game, movie etc…) or if you create for listening enjoyment, but I hear some good melodies in there for sure.
You have a nice build up to the climax. There are one or two overbearing instruments (Or VST’s) but you did well in cutting them short so I can have a break from it from them until your next build up.
My personal tastes don’t have me listening to this while I’m driving down the road but I can definitely find enjoyment listening to your song while playing a nice side scrolling game similar to Super Meat Boy.
Keep up the good tunes
You can’t go wrong with honesty. I totally agree with you. I favor epic background music you might find in a movie or videogame, with an orchestra/ ambient feel. Like John Williams! He’s my idol and has inspired me greatly as a kid -from Star Wars to Jurassic Park (I’m 17 btw so I guess I’m still considered a kid). I try basing my music more off this orchestra form that enriches an experience, and gives you that chilly feeling. Its hard to explain, but I’m sure you know what I mean 
This is actually pretty good, makes me think of something ‘Digitalism’ would make. Plus you say your 17? You’ve got a long way to go, but I have to say I’m excited to follow, wherever your taking this. Keep it up.